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THE HARVARD
EXTENSION SCHOOL WRITING PROGRAM PREVIOUS | CONTENTS | NEXT My Clara
Clara is a true artist, an amazing woman, the equivalent of a modern-day rock star in an era that shunned women, especially in the musical profession. At nine years old, Clara triumphs at her first public performance, but being the consummate perfectionist, she bursts into tears despite a standing ovation. "You must never show your emotions, Clara. Never!" instructs Wieck, and throughout her childhood, Clara obeys . . . until the day she meets the flamboyant composer, Robert Schumann, who comes to study under Wieck's tyrannical tutelage and household. Clara and Robert's connection is apparent, but not until many years later does Clara realize her love for Robert . . . after he proposes marriage to her best friend, the beautiful Baroness Ernestine. Clara charms her way back into Robert's affections, causing him to break his engagement with Ernestine. Upon finding out about the lovers' secret rendezvous, however, Wieck threatens to kill Robert if he and Clara ever speak again. In the shadows of the moonlight, Robert stands alone for hours listening to her play, hoping to get a glimpse of his lost love in the lamplight of an open doorway. Without anyone else to turn to, the desperate Clara seeks out her mother, whom she thinks abandoned her when she was five years old. It is only then that her mother admits Wieck took her to court to win Clara as "his prize," his pawn in a self-serving game of fame and fortune. Clara's growing melancholia threatens Wieck's mission for glory. He promises to give his blessings of marriage if Robert proves a success in Vienna, but the pressure spins Robert into such a manic, depressed state that he must rely on Clara's strength even more to succeed. With Chopin's masterful performance of his composition and the endorsement of the aristocrats, Robert comes back to Leipzig, a success, only to find that Wieck tears up their written agreement. And so, the lovers' illustrious circle of friends--including Chopin, Liszt, and Mendelssohn--mastermind a grand scheme of reunion, only to find that Wieck relies on the court once again, legally prohibiting their marriage. The strong-willed Clara is furious, and despite Wieck's threats of taking her life's earnings and belongings, including her piano, she embarks on a concert tour in Europe, alone, acting as both performer and promoter. She makes enough money to challenge Wieck in court, and after two battles, Clara and Robert prove victorious. Fourteen years later (1856), however, their commitment is tested again when Robert attempts suicide by jumping off a bridge into the Rhine. He is admitted into an insane asylum, and, for two years, Clara is prohibited from seeing her husband. Despite Brahms's attempts to win her affections, Clara stays true to Robert. She receives a telegram from the doctors summoning her to the asylum, with the warning that he will not recognize her. Robert, now frail and senile, envelopes his beloved in his trembling arms and whispers: "My Clara . . . I know you." Schumann dies peacefully just 48 hours after Clara's arrival. She is comforted only by the thought that, through their music, their spirits will be united forever. * * * FADE IN: Ext. Church--Schoenfeld--Present 1856--Day Subtitles: Germany. Late Summer, 1856. A funeral procession winds around a small, white countryside church. Flocked by eight children, a striking woman, CLARA SCHUMANN, 37, with ivory skin, dark eyes and hair, trails behind an ornate casket. Choral music fills the air. The yellowing leaves on the trees crinkle in the breeze, and CLARA looks up at the swaying branch. CLARA (V. O.) I remember a slight breeze in the air
as if his spirit were passing through my soul to bid goodbye.
A dramatic chord sustains as the processional stops at the grave site. CLARA (cont'd) (V. O.) We were devoted to each other like
two doves in a nest . . . until the very end.
CLARA catches the eye of an elderly MAN with slumped shoulders. He trails behind the end of the long train of people. A faint whistle blows in the distance. Ext. Train--Dawn A steam train, silhouetted against the lush European mountains, clatters over a tall, wooden bridge. The whistle grows louder. Int. Train--Dawn Subtitles: A week earlier. CLARA gazes out the open window to the roiling river far below when a plump, jolly woman, GRETCHEN LOCKHART, squeezes into the first-class compartment. She is accompanied by her ladylike daughter, MARTHA, 5. GRETCHEN
CLARA puts on her game face, genuine yet enigmatic. GRETCHEN (cont'd)
CLARA
CLARA is thoroughly amused by GRETCHEN's enthusiasm and girth as she extends her hand. GRETCHEN
(laughs heartily)
Suddenly, the train lurches, sending GRETCHEN's imposing bosoms into CLARA's face. GRETCHEN (cont'd)
Laughing nervously, GRETCHEN adjusts her brassiere while MARTHA hides in embarrassment behind her mother's skirt. GRETCHEN (cont'd)
(nudging)
MARTHA curtsies. MARTHA
GRETCHEN
GRETCHEN nods to MARTHA, who immediately takes the sheet music from her bag and hands it to CLARA. Insert of the title page: Kindergarten by Robert Schumann. GRETCHEN (cont'd)
CLARA
CLARA's eyes twitch. CLARA (cont'd)
CONDUCTOR (O. S.) Next stop, Heidelberg.
CLARA hands MARTHA the manuscript. CLARA
MARTHA
CLARA
MARTHA smiles proudly. The train stops abruptly, and again, GRETCHEN topples on top of CLARA. GRETCHEN
CONDUCTOR (O. S.) All aboard!
GRETCHEN
CLARA forces a smile as they exit. GRETCHEN (cont'd)
CLARA looks down at a beautiful book containing exotic, pressed flowers. The lines around her heavy eyes become deeper, as she squints to read. Insert Gold Inscription: The Book of Remembrance. 1856. The page reads: "Clara, To press a flower from every city in which you stay--from your beloved." CLARA (V. O.) I knew that in the music, our spirits
would be united forever.
CLARA caresses the delicate petals of a white rose when the wind, as if it were a gentle spirit, sweeps them from her long, slender fingers. CLARA (cont'd)
The white petals fill the screen. Ext. Cobblestone Street--Flashback 1824--Morning Subtitles: 1824. A glistening light shines through the petals, revealing their transformation into delicate snowflakes. They fall to the charming snow-covered village. Ext./Int. Tromlitz Home--Clara's Bedroom--Morning Through the gabled window, the same dark eyes belonging to CLARA, 5, follow the snowflakes to the ground. CLARA's mother, MARIANNE TROMLITZ, late 20s, attractive yet worn, fights back tears as she places small, beautiful dresses into three weathered suitcases that lie on the four-poster bed. A Doorbell. MARIANNE stuffs a thick wool coat into the last case, then closes it. MARIANNE
She looks to CLARA, whose black, wavy hair reaches the small of her back. CLARA stands perfectly still, staring out the window. MARIANNE (cont'd)
MARIANNE puts her arms around CLARA's shoulders and turns her around so that they're facing each other. MARIANNE (cont'd) (strokes her hair)
MARIANNE gives her a copy of Grimm's Fairy Tales. MARIANNE (cont'd)
MARIANNE nods, and mimicking her, CLARA does the same, slowly. Int. Carriage--Morning A single tear streams down CLARA's otherwise stoic face as she focuses on MARIANNE, who recedes further and further into the past. The carriage turns the corner, and through the window glass, the slight figure of MARIANNE is replaced by the distorted reflection of the severe face of the MAN (the same MAN from the funeral, now 32 years younger). FRIEDRICH WIECK is an ominous presence, in his 40s, sunken cheeks, hard jawline, tall, dressed in black. WIECK
WIECK's strict voice echoes as CLARA watches girls her own age lying on their backs, making angels in the snow. Int. WIECK' s Home--Piano Room--Day/Night--Montage A metronome accelerates with each action. With perfect posture, CLARA reads from Czerny's Pianoforte Studies and plays scales at the same polished piano. WIECK (V. O.) . . . three to five hours of schooling
per day.
CLARA's eyes are fixated on WIECK and the math equations he writes on the blackboard. WIECK (cont'd) (V. O.) . . . with a one-hour walk.
At sunset, CLARA struggles to keep up with WIECK's long, military-like strides. WIECK (cont'd) (V. O.) . . . Logier's mechanical device for
strengthening. CLARA, with a determined face, stretches her fingers
into a metal contraption.
The metronome swings faster and faster as arpeggios accelerate up and down the keyboard. Int. Wieck's Home--CLARA's Bedroom--1828--Night The reflection of the mirror reveals CLARA wearing the same look of determination, now age 9. To the light of a lone candle, she methodically brushes her hair with one hand and holds Grimm's Fairy Tales in the other. CLARA
A light KNOCK. CLARA, consumed with her evening ritual, does not respond. Johanna Strobel, better known to CLARA as NANNY, enters with two adorable boys, ALWIN, 7, and GUSTAV, 5. NANNY
CLARA
ALWIN/GUSTAV/CLARA
NANNY
ALWIN
CLARA tosses ALWIN onto the bed and tickles him. CLARA
This strikes a fearful chord in ALWIN. ALWIN
(imitates WIECK's gruffness) Like the marching of an army! CLARA
NANNY
GUSTAV tugs at NANNY's skirt. GUSTAV
NANNY
NANNY grabs a basket from behind the door, and GUSTAV pulls out a golden ball of fur. GUSTAV
Relieved, CLARA hugs GUSTAV. GUSTAV (cont'd)
CLARA
ALWIN
CLARA
ALWIN looks sheepish. CLARA
NANNY plumps CLARA's pillow and tucks her into bed. CLARA embraces her tightly. CLARA (cont'd)
NANNY
NANNY kisses CLARA's forehead. Int. Heidelberg Castle--Ballroom--Night The lips of a BLACK HALF MASK gently pull away from a delicate, white-gloved hand. The young man pulls the mask to his forehead, revealing the flamboyantly dressed ROBERT SCHUMANN, 18, boyishly handsome with blue eyes and golden brown hair. He kneels at the feet of a pretty YOUNG WOMAN. ROBERT
ROBERT extends his own gloved hand. ROBERT (cont'd)
Before the woman answers, ROBERT sweeps her into his arms, and they waltz under every chandelier. Ext. Balcony--Later That Evening Swaying precariously from a chair, ROBERT's unsteady left hand holds a freshly inked, cloth napkin while the other holds a champagne glass. With his elbow, he balances himself by leaning on the bald head of his portly best friend, ERNST BECKER. ROBERT
Myriad drunken classmates gather at his heels. HECKLER #1
The group laughs, and ERNST shakes his head. HECKLER #2
ROBERT
ROBERT spies the same YOUNG WOMAN on the balcony and clears his throat. ROBERT (cont'd) (recites dramatically)
He falls off the chair and dances to her. Kneeling on one knee, he wraps his hands around her legs--his head in a provocative position at the top of her thighs. ROBERT (cont'd)
Furious, she removes her mask to reveal . . . AN OLDER VERSION OF THE YOUNG WOMAN dressed in the same costume. She slaps Robert across the face. OLD WOMAN
ROBERT mumbles to himself, his ego crushed. His friends laugh, and ERNST takes him aside. ERNST
(chuckles)
The chamber orchestra begins another waltz. They don their masks and stumble into the ballroom. Int. Wieck's Home--Piano Room--Night CLARA,in a formal gown, plays the same waltz over the grand piano. The instant WIECK enters, she stops. WIECK
She proceeds with perfect posture and precision. WIECK rests his hand on her shoulder. WIECK (cont'd)
CLARA smiles proudly. WIECK (cont'd)
CLARA
WIECK I've arranged for a piano from Vienna, my dear. The latest model by J. Andreas Stein. WIECK walks toward the door. WIECK (cont'd) (shouts out)
Ext. Carriage--Night The Carriage Travels Down A Dirt Road, Past A Large Pond. Int. Carriage--Night Half a dozen giggling YOUNG GIRLS in plain dresses play a game(a la patty-cake) while CLARA looks on with envy. A plump GIRL turns to her. GIRL #1
CLARA
GIRL #1 Alright then, you start. CLARA looks at the expectant eyes and turns away shyly. GIRL #2
CLARA
The GIRLS take their cue and start without her. CLARA joins in, but within moments, her normally dexterous hands become entangled. GIRL #2
GIRL #1
CLARA, embarrassed, stares out the window. Her face becomes more and more concerned as the carriage moves away from the city lights. CLARA (to GIRL #1)
GIRL #1
GIRL #2
CLARA pulls out a pocket watch, then makes her way to the seat directly behind the DRIVER. CLARA
DRIVER #1
CLARA
The girls gasp. DRIVER #1
CLARA
CLARA's eyes fill with tears. CLARA (cont'd) Please, everything must be perfect, just as he has planned it. DRIVER #1
CLARA
The DRIVER snaps the reins, while CLARA rapidly moves her fingers on the tops of her legs as if playing a piece over the keys. Two filled carriages pass, when finally, the DRIVER spots an empty one and waves his arms. DRIVER
(grabs CLARA's hand)
CLARA jumps off the highest step. Int. Gewandhaus--Backstage--Night WIECK and the stodgy CONCERT HALL MANAGER survey the sold-out audience. CLEMENTINE FECHNER, a homely lady with a bump on her protruding nose, early 20s, stands next to EMILIE, 8, American, beyond her years. WIECK
CONCERT HALL MANAGER
WIECK
CONCERT HALL MANAGER
WIECK paces the floor. WIECK
CONCERT HALL MANAGER
(extends his hand to CLEMENTINE)
CLEMENTINE
WIECK (embarrassed)
CONCERT HALL MANAGER
(biting)
WIECK runs his hands through his hair, his brow instantly clammy. Squirming in his suit, he reaches for his watch. CLEMENTINE strokes his shoulder, and WIECK immediately pushes her away. Ext. Gewandhaus--Night Outside, the entrance of the concert hall is lined with horse-drawn carriages. CLARA runs past the fountain, then turns the corner to the back. Int. Gewandhaus--Backstage--Night--Continuous CONCERT HALL MANAGER
CLARA bursts through the backstage door and spots . . . CLARA
EMILIE rushes from the wings to give her a hug. Upon seeing WIECK, CLARA wipes the tears from her eyes. WIECK
CLARA
WIECK peeks through the velvet curtain at the impatient audience, then notices CLARA's heavy breathing. He draws her near. WIECK (fixing her hair)
CONCERT HALL MANAGER
WIECK
CLARA straightens her dress, then reaches for EMILIE's hand. They disappear behind the heavy curtain. Int. Gewandhaus--On Stage--Night CLARA and EMILIE play the final chords of the "Variations of Kalkbrenner." The audience claps enthusiastically. The girls bow, interlock their hands, and race to the wings. Int. Gewandhaus--Backstage--Night CLARA (to EMILIE)
The two girls burst into laughter, as WIECK sneaks up behind them. WIECK
EMILIE squeezes CLARA's hand. EMILIE
CLARA gathers her composure. Int. Gewandhaus--On Stage--Night WIECK escorts CLARA to the piano. WIECK
(to orchestra)
The violinist nods, then taps the music stand. Dissolve to: With WIECK as her page turner, CLARA plays the last movement with her eyes closed. Her body sways to the rhythm in a passionate motion when suddenly, she opens her eyes and searches the sheet music. With perfect technique, CLARA's passion becomes bombastic, as she dramatically plays a chromatic scale leading to the final chord. The audience rises to its feet in a standing ovation, but the protégé looks down and bursts into tears. CLARA (blurts out)
The audience is perplexed. WIECK rushes her backstage. Int. Gewandhaus--Backstage--Night WIECK
CLARA
WIECK
CLARA
WIECK
CLARA wipes her tears and nods. WIECK (cont'd)
(motions CLARA)
CLARA approaches tentatively, and WIECK hugs her close. Int. Wieck's Home--CLARA's Bedroom--Night CLARA meticulously writes a letter. CLARA (V. O.) . . . only my cadenza would not go
easily, where I had to play a chromatic scale three times. I was not
a bit frightened . . .
Int. Tromlitz Home--Study--Night By the firelight, MARIANNE strains to read the letter. CLARA (V. O.) . . . but the clapping troubled me.
Had you been there, I know you would understand. Now you will write
to me, will you not? Your obedient daughter, Clara.
She tenderly places it into a decorated box, half-filled with letters of the like, their wax seals broken. Int. Wieck's Home--CLARA's Bedroom--Night CLARA begins an entry into her diary, struggling to fill the pages. CLARA
(pronounces slowly)
Angle wider to see WIECK hovering over her shoulder, dictating her entry as if her alter-ego. WIECK
CLARA (repeats) Dis-po-si-tion. WIECK
Sitting upright, CLARA writes slowly, making sure every word is spelled perfectly. She wears a look of concern. CLARA
WIECK
CLARA
WIECK
WIECK grabs the diary and pen from her hands and finishes the entry himself. WIECK (cont'd)
As he slaps the diary closed, CLARA's eyes twitch. WIECK (cont'd)
CLARA
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